In English year four have been learning about how to create imagery in poetry writing using similes, metaphors and personification. Today they created images of clouds and we collected our ideas to create this amazing poem:
Clouds are not
big, fluffy polar bears stuck in the sky.
Neither are they
poodles floating across the atmosphere.
They’re not even
white shape shifters running through the air.
Clouds are clouds.
The fog in the air,
a raining sprinkler,
the guardians of the sun,
the precious things which produce snow, hail, thunder and lightening,
the balls full of H20.
This is amazing year four! I am so proud of you all.
Mrs Barry
I loved the poem that Caitlin and Joe made, well done!
I’m glad you liked Caitlin and Joe’s lines in the poem Isaac, thanks for your kind comment.
Mrs Barry
I loved it too!
I loved the poem!
That is a good poem
Thank you Abbie, we’re glad you enjoyed reading it!
Mrs Barry
I thought of the last line.
I loved the line, neither are they poodles floating across the atmosphere.
I loved this too Hayden, it creates an excellent image in the reader’s mind doesn’t it?
Mrs Barry
I think we made a good poem because we made a good team.
I completely agree Alfie!
Mrs Barry
Wow i really like the line about h2o.
I really enjoyed the poem, my favourite bit is ‘the polar bear stuck in the sky’, well done Joe!
I loved the poem , I also enjoyed making it thank you Mrs Barry
You’re very welcome Kate, I’m glad you enjoyed it!
Mrs Barry
I loved everyone’s line in the poem but I especially like Lucas’s line about H20
Amelia Cooke Y4