WHAT CLOUDS ARE!

In English year four have been learning about how to create imagery in poetry writing using similes, metaphors and personification. Today they created images of clouds and we collected our ideas to create this amazing poem:

Clouds are not
big, fluffy polar bears stuck in the sky.

Neither are they
poodles floating across the atmosphere.

They’re not even
white shape shifters running through the air.

Clouds are clouds.

The fog in the air,
a raining sprinkler,
the guardians of the sun,
the precious things which produce snow, hail, thunder and lightening,
the balls full of H20.

This is amazing year four! I am so proud of you all.

Mrs Barry

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