We will be looking at a new type of super sentence this week, and it will make extra good use of all of our work we have recently completed on colons!
This week’s challenge has 3 steps (Use the picture above to help if needed):
1) Convert the following sentence into a de:de sentence by adding on the extra information.
Craig has always been a great friend:
2) Write a de:de sentence of your own about anyone, or anything!
3) Turn yourself into a teacher by teaching someone at home how to write a de:de sentence. Then, when you think they are as brilliant at using them in their writing as your are. Write down their example of a de:de sentence.
Have fun! I can’t wait to see all of your ideas!
Mr Lyons
The old man hung his coat up:it fell down after that.
He was walking to the park :suddnly he noticed he went the wrong way.
craig has been a great friend:even though we fall out so much.
Some great sentences here Emma! I feel sorry for that poor old man! 1dp!
we have a tree in our garden that is starting to flower:because this sort of tree flowers in spring. by my parents.
1. Craig has always been a great friend: he always helps me with my maths work, especially fractions which I really struggle with.
2. Snakes are very venomous: they kill their prey by injecting venom, it can kill very quickly, especially if it is a King Cobra!
3. Jupiter is a planet in the solar system: it is a gas giant and has a storm on it called the red storm, which has been raging for many years.
Even a relative clause used on your last sentence Zaine! Brilliant! make sure you get a dojo point from me tomorrow!
1. Craig has always been a great friend: he always comes round to mine on a Monday.
2. Zebras are unique animals: most of them have black and white stripes.
3. What an awful day; its rained non stop and is set to continue.
1) Craig was a great friend: He was always there for me.
2) Chelsea beat man u 1-0: it was the quarter final of the FA cup!!!
3) I had a good day: everyone was happy.
Craig has always been a great friend: we’ve known each other for 12 years.
Hogwarts was a school: not a normal one, one of witchcraft and wizadry.
Everton are a great football team: a team with a rich, successful history, and a founder member of The Football League.
1. Craig has always been a great friend: he always sits next to me when I’m alone, and helps me with my work.
2. Mr Lyons is an encouraging teacher: he gives dojo points, smiles, and does the Lego challenge during the daily mile.
3. My mums sentence: My eldest son, Cameron, is hard working: he gets up early every morning to do a paper round before school.
1. Craig has always been a great friend: he makes me laugh and smile.
2. You Tube is helpful: most of my magic tricks I have learned by watching clips on You Tube.
3. My dads sentence: Alfie is learning how to play guitar: he goes every Thursday for a one hour lesson and also does a lesson with school every Wednesday.
Craig has always been a great friend;he always cheers me up when I’m sad.
The dog looked vicious;it attacked someone for no reason.
DT was always my favourite subject;I know teach it at a high school.
1. Craig has always been a great friend: he even helps me with my homework.
2. The monkey was very cheeky:it even jumped on the zookeepers shoulders because it wanted some food!
3. The cat was very naughty:it even scratched me on the leg.
Craig has always been a great friend : he makes me happy when I am sad.
I am going to the cinema: I’m watching beauty and the beast.
I’m going on holiday in May : I’m going to France and Spain.
1. Craig has always been a great friend: we have been friends since we were 5.
2. Lions are large predatory animals: they eat zebras deer and much more.
3. My dad catches the train to work: he gets cross when it is late.
Craig has always been a great friend:he always helps me with my homework.
Olly Murs is my favourite singer:he writes really good songs.
MY MUM-
Eve is a very good girl: she always does as she is told.
1. Craig has always been a good friend: He even helped me when I fell over .
2. The crocuses were very pretty : Although, the birds thought they were yummy to eat.
I love to eat sandwiches: But , when I Make them it makes a big mess.
I like playing football : I even scored a goal.
By jasmines dad .
My dad found it had but when I explained it again he got it .
sharks are dangerous : they kill by there raser sharp teath.