Comments on: CHALLENGE 3: DISASTROUS DAY AT THE ZOO

By: ben gibson

ben gibson — Sun, 16 Apr 2017 19:27:53 +0000

the elated boy was on his phone so he felt sick .As he entered the zoo in the car he felt a wet cold sensation on his ear.what was it?was it the wind?It was like someone was rubbing sandpaper onto his face. “EWWWWWW!” screamed his annoying sister “There’s a donkey licking your face!!!

By: Hannah Roberts and Maddison Howe

Hannah Roberts and Maddison Howe — Fri, 14 Apr 2017 13:42:59 +0000

The elated boy sat comfortably in his car seat waiting excitedly to see the animals up ahead. Suddenly, their was a ferocious tiger staring at him through the computer screen now he wasn’t sure if he wanted to go. The boy felt terrified and like he was about to faint,( however on the inside he was excited to see what the creature could do when he got there. ” One hour to go!”called his mum from the front of the car. The boy was anxious: he still didn’t know if he would like it or not.

By: Rory

Rory — Thu, 13 Apr 2017 11:17:43 +0000

As soon as we got there, I started to feel sick because I had been looking down at my game. I put down my window and I was very shocked as something gigantic and long necked stuck its head through my window !!

By: Rory

Rory — Thu, 13 Apr 2017 11:13:01 +0000

As we zoomed to the car, I thought about the animal of the world outside. I felt bored (inside I felt surprised)
I was into my video game, so I didn’t see much of what was going on.