Comments on: DE : DE SENTENCE CHALLENGE

By: max parker

max parker — Thu, 30 Mar 2017 15:57:20 +0000

sharks are dangerous : they kill by there raser sharp teath.

By: Jasmine Rutter

Jasmine Rutter — Sun, 19 Mar 2017 20:10:04 +0000

I like playing football : I even scored a goal.
By jasmines dad .
My dad found it had but when I explained it again he got it .

By: Jasmine Rutter

Jasmine Rutter — Sun, 19 Mar 2017 20:02:19 +0000

1. Craig has always been a good friend: He even helped me when I fell over .

2. The crocuses were very pretty : Although, the birds thought they were yummy to eat.

I love to eat sandwiches: But , when I Make them it makes a big mess.

By: Eve horton

Eve horton — Sun, 19 Mar 2017 19:40:30 +0000

Craig has always been a great friend:he always helps me with my homework.

Olly Murs is my favourite singer:he writes really good songs.

MY MUM-

Eve is a very good girl: she always does as she is told.

By: Hannah Roberts

Hannah Roberts — Sun, 19 Mar 2017 18:59:29 +0000

1. Craig has always been a great friend: we have been friends since we were 5.

2. Lions are large predatory animals: they eat zebras deer and much more.

3. My dad catches the train to work: he gets cross when it is late.

By: Imogen O'Neill

Imogen O'Neill — Sun, 19 Mar 2017 17:02:53 +0000

Craig has always been a great friend : he makes me happy when I am sad.

I am going to the cinema: I’m watching beauty and the beast.

I’m going on holiday in May : I’m going to France and Spain.

By: Neve stassoulli

Neve stassoulli — Sun, 19 Mar 2017 14:02:48 +0000

1. Craig has always been a great friend: he even helps me with my homework.
2. The monkey was very cheeky:it even jumped on the zookeepers shoulders because it wanted some food!
3. The cat was very naughty:it even scratched me on the leg.

By: hayden blakely- jones

hayden blakely- jones — Sun, 19 Mar 2017 13:44:46 +0000

Craig has always been a great friend;he always cheers me up when I’m sad.

The dog looked vicious;it attacked someone for no reason.

DT was always my favourite subject;I know teach it at a high school.

By: Alfie Brown

Alfie Brown — Sun, 19 Mar 2017 12:50:45 +0000

1. Craig has always been a great friend: he makes me laugh and smile.
2. You Tube is helpful: most of my magic tricks I have learned by watching clips on You Tube.
3. My dads sentence: Alfie is learning how to play guitar: he goes every Thursday for a one hour lesson and also does a lesson with school every Wednesday.

By: Evie Brown

Evie Brown — Sun, 19 Mar 2017 12:27:16 +0000

1. Craig has always been a great friend: he always sits next to me when I’m alone, and helps me with my work.
2. Mr Lyons is an encouraging teacher: he gives dojo points, smiles, and does the Lego challenge during the daily mile.
3. My mums sentence: My eldest son, Cameron, is hard working: he gets up early every morning to do a paper round before school.