Comments on: EDINGLY SENTENCES

By: Megan rushton

Megan rushton — Sat, 18 Feb 2017 14:48:04 +0000

1. Climbing happily, the cute little, determined animal achieved his challenge of reaching the peak of the humams finger.

2. Crawling sneakily, the cheeky brown monkey stole the meat from delivery mans box and the delivery man then later got accused of stealing!

3. Staring creepily, the brown and white dog stared at his owner to scare him into giving him some treats.

4. Smiling cutely, the funny baby laughed its head off and showed its one and only little baby tooth.

By: Mrs Charnley

Mrs Charnley — Mon, 13 Feb 2017 12:31:12 +0000

Fabulous work, Year 5. Well done.
Mrs Charnley

By: caitlin

caitlin — Sun, 12 Feb 2017 19:16:52 +0000

1. smiling,happily the baby showed his first tooth

2.staring,nervously the cute little animal clenched the humans figer in fright

3.grabbing,tightly the monkey pulled at the delivery mans t-shirt but diddnt’t get away with it

4. gaping,confused the dog watched a cat chase his brother

By: Evie Brown

Evie Brown — Sun, 12 Feb 2017 18:07:41 +0000

Worriedly the mouse jumped onto the mans fingers because he was frightened of the thunder.

Hitting the man, the chimpanzee pulled the mans top down in envy.

Shocked the bonkers dog was surprised because he had a new baby brother.

Crawling speedily the baby was excited because she had a new tooth so she could eat food!

By: Alfie Brown

Alfie Brown — Sun, 12 Feb 2017 17:26:03 +0000

Scrambling quickly, I saw someone’s thin so I hugged it!!

Running quickly, I tried to pull down his pants.

Terrified of the scary movie, the dog wet his nappy!

Happily, the baby went on a swing.

By: Zaine Fitzpatrick-Smith

Zaine Fitzpatrick-Smith — Sun, 12 Feb 2017 14:26:26 +0000

1. Jumping crazily, the Baboon tried to steel from the human.

2. Gazing weirdly, the dog slobbered all over the place.

3. Hurting agonisingly, the baby Chipmunk clawed his nails into my finger.

4. Smirking funnily, the baby was overjoyed at his birthday cake.

By: Amelia Cooke

Amelia Cooke — Sun, 12 Feb 2017 10:27:51 +0000

1. Griping consistently, the minute little mouse grinned to himself as the man failed to shake him of his finger.
2.Pulling tightly, the baboon grabbed the mans belt, knocked him over and stole his fruit!
3. Barking loudly, the dog was shocked that a cat just stood in front of him and pounced on him.
4.Laughing mischievously, the baby giggled because he burped in his parents face.

By: Joe white

Joe white — Fri, 10 Feb 2017 16:24:32 +0000

Hugging, tightly the tiny cute creature cuddled the persons finger like he was afraid of something.

Jumping, cheekily the naughty baboon jumped in the air like he was steeling something of a person.

Smiling cutely the one toothed baby smiled like he just born. But he was actually trying to scream at the baby sitter.

Watching, wierdly the boxer named ralph he watching closely as his owner as he came in he jumped up and picked his owner leaving all the sliver on him.

By: Joseph Orrell

Joseph Orrell — Thu, 09 Feb 2017 20:11:45 +0000

clinging desperately the little mammal tried to hold onto the person’s finger grabbing cheekily the monkey grabbed hold of the person’s jumper staring stupidity the dog was surprised
laughing happily the baby was in a good mood