Comments on: Perfect poems http://cohort2011.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2016/11/16/328/ Welcome to the Year 5 Blog! Thu, 28 Jun 2018 18:38:13 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=3.9.40 By: Miss Killeen http://cohort2011.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2016/11/16/328/#comment-597 Mon, 28 Nov 2016 18:45:11 +0000 http://cohort2011.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/?p=328#comment-597 Beautiful poem Zaine very deep and thoughtful you truly deserve your 5 golden tickets.

]]> By: Miss Killeen http://cohort2011.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2016/11/16/328/#comment-596 Mon, 28 Nov 2016 18:41:39 +0000 http://cohort2011.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/?p=328#comment-596 Really moving Caitlin very well done!

]]> By: Caitlin http://cohort2011.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2016/11/16/328/#comment-586 Sun, 20 Nov 2016 21:36:39 +0000 http://cohort2011.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/?p=328#comment-586 P recious poppies in the fields of life and death

O n top of lifeless body’s that were once fighting for their country

P eople waiting for their men to come home from the war

P opping of gunfire, piercing screams

Y elling of pain , we will never forget

]]> By: Mr Lyons http://cohort2011.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2016/11/16/328/#comment-584 Thu, 17 Nov 2016 08:00:11 +0000 http://cohort2011.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/?p=328#comment-584 WOW! What a fantastic poem Zaine! I think this definitely deserves 5 golden tickets!

]]> By: Zaine Fitzpatrick-Smith http://cohort2011.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/2016/11/16/328/#comment-583 Wed, 16 Nov 2016 20:11:06 +0000 http://cohort2011.woodfieldblogs.co.uk/?p=328#comment-583 Lonely soldier,
Blood red flowers,
Loudly, death screams in my ears.
Sunrise creeping over a new day,
sadness rising on low hills, against splattered flowers in lost war.
Wind whispering over lifeless poppies,
I will remember friends I have lost.

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