Comments on: WHAT CLOUDS ARE!

By: Amelia

Amelia — Mon, 19 Oct 2015 11:15:39 +0000

I loved everyone’s line in the poem but I especially like Lucas’s line about H20

Amelia Cooke Y4

Mrs Barry — Sun, 18 Oct 2015 19:30:30 +0000

I loved this too Hayden, it creates an excellent image in the reader’s mind doesn’t it?

Mrs Barry

Mrs Barry — Sun, 18 Oct 2015 19:26:38 +0000

I completely agree Alfie!

Mrs Barry

Mrs Barry — Sun, 18 Oct 2015 19:18:39 +0000

You’re very welcome Kate, I’m glad you enjoyed it!

Mrs Barry

Kate — Sun, 18 Oct 2015 19:10:40 +0000

I loved the poem , I also enjoyed making it thank you Mrs Barry

Zaine Fitzpatrick-Smith — Sun, 18 Oct 2015 16:31:11 +0000

I really enjoyed the poem, my favourite bit is ‘the polar bear stuck in the sky’, well done Joe!

joe w — Sun, 18 Oct 2015 16:22:26 +0000

Wow i really like the line about h2o.

Alfie Brown — Sun, 18 Oct 2015 12:05:10 +0000

I think we made a good poem because we made a good team.

Ben gibson — Sat, 17 Oct 2015 11:20:09 +0000

I loved it too!

Hayden blakeley-jones — Sat, 17 Oct 2015 07:00:51 +0000

I loved the line, neither are they poodles floating across the atmosphere.